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I have an online manga, I would love to know what you guys think (^w^)
I request you be polite, but criticism is welcome here is the site www.flossandchaos.com |
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♪ єvєяyЬøđy, єvєяyЬøđy! gєτ up! gєτ up! σħ yєaħ! s-s-s-sτaηđ up! đση'τ Ьє sħy! pєøplє, pєøplє, pєøplє! gєτ up! gєτ up! gєτ up! єvєяyЬøđy, єvєяyЬøđy... ♪ ♦τєsτιғy!♦ I got kicked off the fast computer so I can't play zomg. I guess I'll read this. Hmm it's not noobish either, looks promising enough. ♦τєsτιғy!♦ ♪ єvєяyЬøđy, єvєяyЬøđy ġєτ đøwη ġєτ đøwη ηøw! s-s-s-sτaηđ up! đøη'τ Ьє sħy! pєøplє, pєøplє, pєøplє! cuτ up, gєτ up, gєτ up! єvєяyЬøđy τєsτiғy! ♪ |
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Wow! Thats really pretty good! You should color some of it, but then again it looks like you spent alot of time on the illustration area, so i could understand if you didnt want to color. Otherwise, good work! Now, off to actually read it.
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Intresting start, i'd like to see where it goes.
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I see good art!
I like good art... |
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It looks very nice. Well done and keep up the good work.
I'll have to actually read it tomorrow. I have to go to bed. But what I don't understand is, why put it online? Are you going to sell it. Or do you just want to see the responses that you are going to get from it? |
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wow, this actually looks...good gold star for you |
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Bookmarked.
The art is great, and the story looks like it will be pretty interesting. |
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 Finally. A webcomic with some good artwork.  |
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wow, thanks everyone (^w^)
@Covered_in_Black_Solitude I would like to sell this, however, there isnt a market for fledgling artist like me... have you heard of megatokyo? it is an online manga that started out like mine, and its his full time job now. I would like to use this site to gather a fan base, and eventually get published. @babyl10 thats an intresting comment about the font... I will look at some manga again. also~ thats pretty much it.. so far... I will be updating soon, so keep checking ^w^ |
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It looks like it will be pretty epic, best of luck!
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Looks good but I'm not sure about the story (because I haven't read it yet sweatdrop ). Just because the artwork is nice doesn't mean the story is... many seem to forget that.
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 Sayonara mata ne genki de ite ne zutto zutto wasurenai kara And here I thought we were all going to be tricked into something horrible. I hope that you are able to publish this one day. I think it'll do well.  Sayonara kitto mata aeru yo ne? Yakusoku dayo! yubikiri genman |
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[[#1, most obsessive Tsunayoshi Sawada, Giotto, Hayato Gokudera, Spanner, Gabishi, Agito, Yoite, Fran (KHR), and Jack Frost fanwhore in the universe.]] [[Waifu of Tsunayoshi Sawada, Hayato Gokudera, Giotto, Spanner, and Basil.]] [[My OTP is, and always will be, 5927. Hayato belongs with Tsuna and no other.]]  A/M/C's most rabid, obsessive, and possessive Tsunayoshi Sawada fantard. Looks promising. I like your art style. *bookmarks* Kit has claimed Tsunayoshi Sawada. Kit literally loves Tsunayoshi. Hands off, bitches. My claims on Hayato, Giotto, and Spanner are still in effect. Yeah, that's right. They're still mine.  [[#1 Anti-Yamamoto Fantard in the universe. I want him dead.]] [[#1 Anti-8059 Fantard in the universe. I will kill you if you mention it to me.]] [[I've claimed Fran and his Froggie Hat~]] |
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