KingBet
true i have noticed that
stare
great. I think I am going to split it in half then ^^
1 poem will be about the strings, and the second will be about the love.
and very interesting remark about leaving the poem open for interpretation. I guess I haven't written enough poetry yet to notice that. Usually when I write I like to have a double meaning, or to make refrences to the outside world. Although making things open wouldn't be so bad as well lol XD
another question though. Okay so i'm officiall breaking it up now, but my first poem about the strings... I'm kind of hesitant on how to wrap up that whole idea. I mean it seems like a very negative poem, and my goal in poetry is more of making a realization rather than underlining sad emotions. Do you think it would be a better poem if it ended negatively, or is there a possibility of me making it a somewhat positive experience?
and lol XD
that is pretty slow, but understandable
omg when i started bleach i got caught up in about 2 weeks o.0
I literally couldn't stop watching, and finished like 12 episode a day @.@
Sounds good to me. It will probably make it easier to focus on the two pieces when seperate.
3nodding
Haha, give it a try sometime and see how it goes~
As for ending the poem, I can't quite say. It depends on how you feel about it as to how it should end. Usually if you leave the poem of a while and come back to it, you'll find a better way to end it. This is especially true for a poem I left alone for months that is now finally finished. However, I never expected mine to take the turn it did, but it makes enough sense. Basically, just don't force it to end a way just to make it work...If that makes sense.
sweatdrop
Yeah, talking to everyone on here slows it down a bit, but gives it plenty of time to load. I'll be lucky if I finish a third episode today though~ I remember one time when I watched all of Samurai 7 with my friend. That was one of the most addicting yet saddest anime for me~
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