It isn't bad there are a few proportions off here and there but, as a whole it isn't entirely bad. The top of the head where you were coloring it in is a bit scribbled like the angle was awkward for you or something....Her lower lip is a little too small and the forehead seems a bit too big....the bangs probably should have been started a little farther up instead of so far back on the forehead.
<Not trying to be mean!!!! Just doing that Constructive Criticism stuff >
I hope so too...
Kara- Thanks but can you comment on my shading as well. I could use a few lessons on Anime and Realism but I taught myself so I think I did pretty good job considering I've never even used a book on anime to learn.