A Heart Like A Burning Candle

• Artist: xXBloodyGummyBearXx
• Description: Got lonely and kind of mentally energetic so i came up with this.
• Date: 04/24/2012
• Tags: heart like burning candle

heart heart heart My heart has been broken so many times,
it has been stolen like thousands of crimes,
I was loved for my looks but for not who I am
I speak in mental thought for my waisted personallity
yet I never really care of what they take of me
for I am independant and I am strong for it does not hurt me for what is now gone
so still i keep my originality that I am hostile and sure it is like a crown jewel
to be admired but yet so tempting to take yet it will never be moved
my heart is like a burning candle because it always contains
a firey passion from the lit flame and the light will always hold me together through
thick and thin my heart is my candle and I hold it within. heart heart heart

Comments

[xXBloodyGummyBearXx]

k thnx its good to know that people feel free to correct my mistakes

[Spellzmage]

whoa whoa whoa... slow down. Don't be too energetic that you forget to split it up into stanzas. When people see a big blurb of writing they're less likely to read it. you obiously have a lot of talent but you need to give people a chance to thoroughly enjoy it. Best of luck to you and your mentally energetic self ^-^ 5/5