Memories and Time

• Artist: Whispering Shadower
• Description: Recently, ina way I had to leave ,a type of home. It was the second hardest thing ive ever done. This is me coming to terms with it.
• Date: 11/14/2011
• Tags: memories time

I miss the good old days
I'm starting to forget what we used to say
Its time to move on
I feel like I've been conned
Times have given me a beating
But I'm grateful for the treating
The pictures of we
seem to follow me
It's time to close the door
and open the window
Memories are told
but time still unfolds
The eight of us always seemed to berate
but I must let it go
I have to move forward
I want to say no
I cant go backwards
The end isnt near
its already here

Comments

[Alkalune]

Starts out as good lyrics for a song, but then you lose me at line 7. Just bad grammar and your rhyme disappears, which is probably the only thing you had going. The last two lines are a good ending, you just need to fix the lines from 7 through 11.

[Oakyia]

other then the weird spelling, i give you a 3/5. You almost have the story in my head.