You Cant Kill Love

• Artist: Sakiya Seki Shina
• Description: This is a poem i wrote about a gothic man whos wife is taken away from him this is not a romance poem although it sounds like it its more a angry poem hope you injoy it yet again dont let my spelling fails get in the way .xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
• Date: 05/28/2011
• Tags: cant kill love

a true angel of death
the days we spent together
huging and wearing our leather
sea shining bright
soaking in the light.
why did you have to die
your soul ripped away from mine
empty now
empty without your love
yet ill never forget.
that peace of trash
goth hater trash
now ill go after him slash and gash
disfigure his stupid face
leave him in disgrace
hell live his life
why wont you die
stupid chav just die
you ruined my life
you took my wife
now he gets away
after that stupid day
i got locked away for cutting his face to shreads
i am doing time
for getting revenge
but i no im going to die
is that another crime
im going to die
reinited with my wife
this noose around my neck
will seperated my fate
im coming back my love together we will be
eternaty cant seperat us in dead will be in love
forever more my gothic dove f

Comments

[Pure_Celestial_Snow]

you have to wonders sometimes though. Can even the angel of death have a heart? If so is it cracked and broken or just a black hole?

[Sakiya Seki Shina]

like i said im not best speller or best at puntuation or grammer so say this i will ignore you blessed be .xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[Irenex3]

Capatalize your stanzas. Spelling mistakes, etc. It doesn't look as impresssive with them not being spelled correctly or capatalized. I almost gave up reading....