Goodbye

• Artist: loving_incognito
• Description: A story of the cheated and broken hearted and what not. READ AND RATE PLEASE!
• Date: 11/30/2010
• Tags: goodbye

You left me one night with no goodbye
Now you say you want me back and I wonder why
Everyone can see that you're an awful guy
The evidence was in the tears you made me cry
Were all the things you said part of one big lie?
Now once again I have caught your eye
But this time I won't even try
Now its my turn to say goodbye

Comments

[Yutora]

I don't really know what exactly to say; honestly, I was kind of annoyed by the 'every word rhymes' thing. (Although, I myself have done it before XD) I have no clue, but it just simply annoyed me. Something about it feels empty, I suck at describing what I mean. But yeah, 3/5