Emotions

• Artist: pink328
• Description: this is actually a song. if you think it would suck as a poem, i agree.
  
• Date: 10/28/2010
• Tags: emotions

What is loneliness??
Does it make you feel like a child??
What is loneliness???
Does it make you feel unalive??
What is loneliness??
Does it make you feel like different shades of gray???
what is... Loneliness?
Do you feel it in your bones?

what is sadness?
do you understand?
what is sadness?
do you see it at all, sadness is your fears, trapping you in a cage...
where you waste away.
sadness,
an unfortunate thing
can't control it,
can't explain it,
you can't run from it,
can't get away.

What is happiness?
I don't know anymore.
does it make you feel whole, and so much more?
you wouldn't know if it slapped you in the face,
come over here, watch it slip away...

Comments

[suiiciide_babyy]

its a little to repettive im sorry but its not very good at all you need to work on it it can be a good poem but maybe you shoutl try to use differant words and try to make it rime a little bit maybe pull and sat out i=good luck with it though and i would heed my advice if you want to get any beter