Why

• Artist: Silvia135
• Description: I wrote this poem after I've cried. No one had seen it. Everyone had simply continued doing what he has done before, as if everything were normal, and as if nothing had happend . Almost as if I had not cried. At that moment this poem came to mind. I think it describes very well how I felt at that moment.
• Date: 07/03/2010
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Why
I hide my pain, but I know, you can feel it. I hide my tears, but I know, you can see them.
I know, you know, that I cried, but you dont ask me why.
No, you dont try to take my torture away.I dont even know, why you care less.
All that I know is, that I am in a real big mess.

Comments

[Silvia135]

@FieryDawn
I corrected it. Now it should be error free.

[Silvia135]

@FieryDawn: I thank you for this last extremely nice compliment.
Something nice no one has said about my poems for a long time.
And also thank you that you have made me aware of this little spelling error. That happens usually only very rarel to me, because I am otherwise very good in English, but a small mistake can happen to anyone. I think it's very nice of you that you have reminded me.

[FieryDawn]

AWESOME 5/5 I love that you don't stick to a typical line format. My only advice would be to spell check (ex: no should be know).

[Silvia135]

@xXIRawrzUrCookehsXx Thanks for your nice comment. I know you mean it seriously. And I appreciate very much.

[EmoCookehz]

sweet biggrin