Who's the Villain?

• Artist: 0DD_S3X
• Description: 3:)
• Date: 06/27/2010
• Tags: whos villain

This is just one of those poems
where the good guy turns bad
the rain starts to fall
this story ends sad

so some know the reason
behind the heroes demise
some point to the villain
they saw treason in his eyes

But hold on?
is it really the villain
who did this?

or was it us?

Comments

[Dubhlinn]

Perhaps the 'Hero' and 'Villain' are just your classic stereotypes with no significant traits, anyway. I'm not telling you how to think, 2pound, but personally, I think the vagueness suits this rather well. I agree with you, Sapphire. People don't use enough imagination anymore. x.x

[0DD_S3X]

I left it like that because adding to it wouldnt give people enough space to use there imagination. I want the READER to map out the story. I just set the guidelines.

[2pound]

vagueness does not make a poem; in fact, it destroys it. try to be a little bit more precise; if you wanna leave us hanging at the end, at least give your villain and hero some characteristic structure.