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Two eyes glance away,
Forgetting the words that you say,
Trying to erase the moments that we shared,
Try to forget that you never truly cared,
Two lives that acted as one,
Lost in a fight that they could of never won,
You had one heart now you have two,
Mine will always belong to you.
- Title: Untitled
- Artist: broken724
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- Date: 04/05/2010
- Tags: untitled love breakup
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- broken724 - 07/11/2010
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-.- I can't believe i did that
& thank you biggrin - Report As Spam
- submeth - 07/11/2010
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WARNING: SPELLING NAZI
You might have already realized this (or not) but you misspelled "Untitled". (Not that that's a big problem)
Anyways, my favourite line is "Lost in a fight that they could of never won". I love your way of wording. &&you even managed to make them rhyme! 8D! <3 - Report As Spam
- gracegrudge - 04/14/2010
- This is pretty damn cute. 4/5 =)
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