Why?

• Artist: heavens_little_devil23
• Description: Um a poem about me cutting which was inspired by a conversation I was having with my friend. The words in red are the girl, the words in blue are the guy, the words in black are what's going on and the words in purple are the guy and the girl together.
• Date: 12/21/2009
• Tags: cuts love saddness tears scars

"Why?"
"I'm depressed."
"Don't do it please."
"Already did, always will.
I cut to get my thrill."
"Dammit."
"It's just a cut, a little cut."
She takes the blade
She shows her pain
With scars, with blood, with tears
"Promise me you won't do it again."
"I can't." She whispers in his ear.
"Love, don't cry."
"I want to die."
They both look up and ask God, "Why?"

Comments

[mirachan3]

I liked the poem and its personal touch. It's emotional down pour and its structure, rhyme, and it's message. I think this is how a lot people feel when it comes to the emotionally distressed and the people who cut themselves. 5/5

[Infected Fruit]

eh i do not the end.