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As I take a look around,
I never hear a single sound,
As I feel the falling drops of rain,
I feel the many lost people's pain,
I know that they are sad and missed,
That some have felt death's cold kiss,
They are lost, away from home,
And now, they are truely alone.
- Title: Alone
- Artist: Zippo 83
- Description: A poem I made, hope ya all like it. It's sad though..
- Date: 06/13/2009
- Tags: alone
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xX_black emo girl15_Xx - 07/12/2009
- nice small poem goood rhyme i like it
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- Zippo 83 - 06/16/2009
- Thanks a lot! biggrin I love positive feedback ^^
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- WTF Jenny - 06/15/2009
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who cares about the ******** spelling this poem ROCKS!! WOO_HOO ^^
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- Zippo 83 - 06/15/2009
- Dang. I knew I should of spellchecked before I copied this to here from my profile on Yoshiart. X_X
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- -Deathly Destruction- - 06/14/2009
- Spell check ftw- it's spelled 'truly', not 'truely'. That sort of ruined it for me. :/
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