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Falling,
Down,
Down,
Down,
Everything is crashing,
Crashing down,
Down around me.
Crashing,
Everything is crashing down around me.
Falling down,
Down.
Plummeting down to earth,
Being stepped on,
Everything.
My world,
Dying.
All life, all hope.
All faith, all love.
All hate all good.
All bad.
All.
All dead.
Gone,
Down,
Down,
Down,
My world crashing.
Crashing to earth
Now it’s dead.
- by hot cherries101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/19/2009 |
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- Title: falling
- Artist: hot cherries101
- Description: i wrote this a lot of really bad things was happening in my life. please rate and cooment. THNX!! (its not one of my best)
- Date: 05/19/2009
- Tags: falling
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Comments (2 Comments)
- TheKhamaseen - 06/07/2009
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yes... I am going to talk crap about your writing when it is so expositional... and hey I'll go there: childish that there is no reason I'd need or want to read it a second time.
no dynamic imagery or theme. also... you use the words: life, faith, hope, love, and dead in such an arbitrary manner... well they might as well not even have meaning. - Report As Spam
- Lilithmae - 05/22/2009
- What's this supposed to be,a song or a poem? I like it either way.
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