the confessions of a rape vic.

• Artist: Daddy Got This Account
• Description: NO this did NOT happen to me. i was almost raped, but it didnt happen. i read other peoples rape poems and came up with this. so once again, THIS DID NOT HAPPEN TO ME. please rate and comment.
• Date: 05/15/2009
• Tags: confessions rape

In my darkest days,
You are my nightmare..
My everlasting nightmare..
All there is, is...
Your face so very close to mine...
Your horrid breath on my neck slowly creeping lower...
Your hands grip me so tightly...
All i feel is pain...
All i hear is your moans and groans...
Your taste i will never be able to forget....
Your voice i will never forget...
your face will haunt me..
Your touch will never leave..
You horrid smell will never leave my nostrils..
You penetrate me deeply..
And all i can feel is pain...
So much pain..
I scream out...
You hit me...
Does she know..?
Does the one i call "mom" know..?
Does the one you call "wife" know what goes on behind closed doors...?
Why me..?
Why not her..?
I dont understand..
Yet again,
Do i want to know...?
I cant take this any more...
I dont want you inside...
You took away everything..
You took my light..
You took my smile..
You took away my innocence...
I dont wanna go on like this..
Hiding..
Pretending..
But..
I know as long as youre here...
"mom" will never know what goes on behind the closed doors..
Ill suffer forever...
But all i want..
Is..
You out of me...

Comments

[MJgwarrocker66]

5/5. much deserved 5/5. hang in there. keep writting though.

[CaucasianNoodles]

thats really good sis, its deep too

[290DarkStars]

oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... hehe *gives an "innocent smile" well... I should have read your description and the comments below before doing that *points to the comment below and the whole in the wall* ahe... well... stilll.... 5/5 sweatdrop

[290DarkStars]

OH MY GOSH! *cries out in wrath* IF I KNEW ABOUT THIS b*****d OF A FATHER LONG AGO..... *pauses* AH DAMN IT ALL TO HELL! DAMN!... *starts to breath slowly and takes his fist out of the wall* ok... you did well, extreamly well at describing your pain in the poem *cries* I am so... so sorry that this happened to you.... 5/5 and mush deserved... Oh God....

[Americanleg85]

its deep, depressing, sad. i love it! i also love how we can express ourselves through art.

[Daddy Got This Account]

well see, i almost got raped. so i do kinda know. but thanks for your comment! ^^

[chyeahh the great]

wow that is pretty deep for someone who HASNT been raped before. one thing tho... plz dont put deep and meaningful poems like these in the arena. it can trigger some things in people because they might not like you writing false things here or they might have gone through it and dont want you to act like you noe what ur talking about.