Crushed

• Artist: citygurl__63-wisteria-
• Description: This is a poem I wrote shortly after me and my ex broke up
• Date: 04/15/2009
• Tags: crushed

You said you would stay.
You asked if it was okay.
I said it was fine
with hopes that you would be mine.
You crushed my hopes and dreams,
when you tore my heart at the seams.
By simply saying you belong to her.
You never thought to think that it might occur
that I loved you with everything I had.
Now everything about u makes me mad.

Comments

[Caesura Caelum]

ah, i must say i can understand how you feel, except from a guys point of view, i think you may like some of my poems, idk everyone has there own taste, anyways i hope all goes well for you and good job with the poem.

[kuroshimodo-original]

Tragic but helps one to evolve.