Past The Eye Can See

• Artist: Internet Trends
• Description: A little poem I wrote in an hour. Tell me if this is publishing material.
• Date: 03/29/2009
• Tags: past world religion dream lost

In all my shrouded memories,
There’s one I’ve grown a longing for.
It’s somewhere past the eye can see,
I cannot see it, still

And once my mind begins to look
For what I’ve grown a longing for,
My eyes perceive what’s yet been took
By others who long more.

They waste away their eager minds
To view what they’ve been longing for:
A sad attempt to try and find
Their exorbitant door.

And once they find this memory
In which they’ve grown a longing for,
This divine image starts to flee
Far past the eye can see.

But in a moment’s glare I find
What I’ve been ever longing for,
The ever lasting point in time
In which I’d seek no more

But as I viewed the memory
In that which I’d been longing for
There’s nothing past the eye can see
And I can see no more.

Comments

[maydaymouse]

it's pretty good, but it's your final decision on whether publishing or not but 5/5 ^^

[cooll666725]

The poem pretty good. I'm not sure about the publishing idea, but I'll rate it a 4/5. ^_^

[sOpHiE_irIzARry666]

this is a really good poem