the way i feel

• Artist: doughertygirl42
• Description: a poem a bout how i feel.
• Date: 03/25/2009
• Tags: feel

The way that i feel
like unreal
i feel like I'm on a reel
i have no friends
i wish that this nightmare would end
i don't think that i can comprehend
what i'm saying
like i'm playing
into a trap
slaying my own life
not doing right
the way that i feel
is like unreal

Comments

[FLORIDA1010101]

This is an amazing poem. I would like to give you advice; it is best not to include like in a poem you can use it to describe a feeling but it the way you use it in the second and last line is not the best way to use it. Great poem that describes the feeling off many people in all situations.