The Path to Heaven

• Artist: forcestormpilot
• Description: This is a poem about life.
• Date: 03/23/2009
• Tags: path heaven

The road stretching past the horizon.
My feet aching from the journy.
The sun is setting like an hourglass.
It's counting my days,
on this path,
in this life,
under the stars,
outside the door to everlasting peace.

Comments

[Dark Angel Of Night]

YOu can clean it up a little. exm.
"The road stretching the horizon" but i like it short and simple and woudl be fine the way it is AND you cuodl add on to it later too. I do that with a lot of my work.