Gone Forever.

• Artist: XoXo-Suicidal-oXoX
• Description: Just another poem I wrote....
• Date: 03/22/2009
• Tags: gone forever

All those memories,
Gone,
Just like the wind,
I wish I could have you here again.

I will love you,
Forever,
Just like I did,
Before you gave in.

Because of those life-stealer's,
Your gone,
Forever,
Because of those dream-killers,
Your forever,
Gone.

Comments

[fallingsakurablossoms]

Short, but good.

[Dragonpop124]

That is sooooo awesome. you sound heart broken and that is the mood of the poem.when you can just PUT ur emotions into writing, ur really gifted. and i think the rhythm is great.

[Pumpkin Mocacinno]

Commas aren't necessary at the end of each line... It indicates a pause in the poem. A good way to make sure your work has a nice flow is to read it aloud and punctuate as needed.