Take My Hand 3

• Artist: Zuri Zai
• Description: I made a lot of these a while ago, but I just wanted to see what people say. =) Good and bad comments please!! (if you can't tell every other line is a different person
• Date: 02/26/2009
• Tags: take hand

Take My Hand Trust Me.
I can’t
Trust me I won’t hurt you
You don’t know how many people
have told me that
But you know you can trust me
I do, but I don’t want to get hurt
I won’t hurt you, I love you too much.
I can’t….You know I can’t...I’m gonna go now
No, stay. If you stay I promise not to leave you
I want to stay…… but I don’t want to hurt you
Take my hand I love you
Tell me why I should listen to you
Because I love you
You know, I used to believe that too, but love fades
Not mine. I would never hurt you. You have to believe me
No I’m tired of believing that your hand is love
Take my hand, trust me. I love you
No you don’t, love doesn’t lie
I’m not lying, you have to trust me
What if I can't?
Take my hand I love you.

Comments

[Panda the QT]

Very romantic

[-xXxShatteredxXxMindxXx-]

this is exactly how my friend was feeling with her bf.

[Sunafire]

I loved the way you used two different narrative voices.
You could have perhaps developed this more smile

[Crystall Skin]

This is very stirring.