Far Away

• Artist: kamahaazi
• Description: Lyrics I wrote one day. THERE IS A REVISED VERSION!!! PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE ON THAT ONE!!!
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: away

dont' you know im slipping away
from you cold, frozen hands
you couldnt catch me if you tried
Im too far away for you to crawl to me

im too far away for you to yell at me
cant you see im not with you anymore?

Ive left you for good, never coming back
your never lay your blodshot eyes on me again,
your shouting covered my screams
im too far away for to drag me back,

im too far away for you to torture me
cant you see im not with you anymore

Im too far away for you to beg me to come back,
cant you see you've let me die?

Comments

[kamahaazi]

noted. There would be a chorus and some repetition involved. not to mention music to fill in gaps.

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

i think its good, but a bit short to be a song. a poem i can it as and there are some errors on it, but besides that i luv it nice work ^^