I.Love.You.

• Artist: xCandidxTragedyx
• Description: yet another love poem for a friend
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: iloveyou

when you asked "what are you thinking?"
and you always ask when i'm thinking about "you"
and i can't say it, so i just turn away.
let the blushed cheeks say...

i love you.

when you tried holding me
and i said "i don't like being touched"
you just moved me a bit closer
our skin brushed...

i love you.

when you said "are you okay?"
and i finally said "no"
the truth came crashing
inside we both died...

i love you.

now you're saying "leave"
and all i can think is "why?"
walking away from you
and i start to cry...

i love you.

Comments

[Mfrieler324]

I don't think the first few verses flowed very well, but I was really surprised at the last one. It was pretty good and you got a good concept going but it could use some touching up biggrin