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Peace Forever by mikiKMS
A small dirty hand tenaciously holds me
Unitl I am set free with a toss,
I am round like an apple,
But rough around the edges like a piece of sand paper,
As gray as a dolphin,
I am like a child playing hopscotch,
But when I sink into the ground of the azure lake,
I am done playing and I am at peace.
- by iiHuggable |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/09/2009 |
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- Title: Peace Forever
- Artist: iiHuggable
- Description: i had to write a poem for homework and came up with this.
- Date: 02/09/2009
- Tags: peace child animals andlake
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- Sweenys_Revenge - 02/12/2009
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Woah.
That was a tad confusing, I think you over used the metephors.
But it's was really whimsical in a mature kind of way.
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