Feelings

• Artist: Big_City_Dreams21
• Description: This was written about my feelings for my love. He is my inspiration for a lot of things but this one poem especially. I want your honest oppinion on it but don't be too harsh please. I don't like negativity.
• Date: 02/09/2009
• Tags: feelings

This is how I feel when I'm sitting next to you
talking, standing
when I'm holding your hand.
I love the way you make me feel.
When you smile with such warmth
it takes my breath away.
When you laugh
its like rays of sunshine beating against my face.
There's no easy way to say this
except those three words
but I think they don't matter
because you mean the world.

Comments

[emoly01]

Well, it was good. It was too happy for me, but it was good. four stars =)