wet spider

• Artist: KisstheTimes121
• Description: unsure, just wrote it quickly
• Date: 02/01/2009
• Tags: spider lonely sadness longing

sitting on my tombstone, in shades of white
my bones dark in this lonely night.
i did my deeds; the raging steed-
carelessly sewing my seed.
the future looks bitter and the past is wrong;
i seek comfort all day long.
someday i know she will come
and free me from the web I've spun.
no longer a spider i will be-
no longer alone; a fish in the sea

Comments

[StevenStBlaize]

The beginning was painfully cliche.
The end was only the slightest redemption through the introduction of the concept of hope and transformation.