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Wake me up when villians fade..
and cruelty loses it's facade.
Call me back, when listening ears will wait...
to only be heard should be no ones fate.
Come to me, when I'm alone and crying,..
I can't help it, really, I'm trying..
Lie to me, it feels so good.
Truth hurts and cuts..
And it should.
Break me down, kick me now.
I see your hate.. That's right,
I know.
Look at me, you pathetic wretch.
I'm bruised and bleeding.
Ye, notorious feind,
watch me whimper, hear my scream.
And all the world will dance with glee,
to see the one who's bleeding is me.
- by Kechero-TheForsakenRose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/26/2009 |
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- Title: Bleed.
- Artist: Kechero-TheForsakenRose
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Description:
I was recently diagnosed with depression... Woop-de-do... So, I'm gonna start releasing my feeling in writing like I used to...
Sorry if this annoys you. - Date: 01/26/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- NerdyMiss - 08/15/2010
- I really like from 'break me down' I think from then on it flows very well. I had to struggle to read through the beginning. I suggest playing with the punctuation. ^^ 3/5
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- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 04/15/2009
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- My_Konstantine - 01/26/2009
- I really like it. It is something I can relate to and the poem flows so nicely. Definitely one of the better poems I've read recently. Great job, really.
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