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It was outside the window.....
I turned around.....
it was sad.....
with its hollow black and yellow eyes.....
it stared at meh for wat seemed and eternal
it walked to the door
without a doubt i followed it.....
knock knock knock went the door
my heart beat fast as i open the door to hell
and there it stood behind the door
the shadow
the thing
and odly i wanted to touch it
i reached out as the same he did to meh
when i touched it
i felt eternal darkness but a shed of light
it smiles
and leaves with a heart.....
- by x__iiMisteor |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/25/2009 |
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- Title: the shadow
- Artist: x__iiMisteor
- Description: this happend to meh in real life and i want to share it with you
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: shadow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iiVioletRoze xx - 03/19/2009
- wow zero.... very deep... :'( i love it. amazing!
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- x__iiMisteor - 01/27/2009
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thank you alot
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- sammaul_1212 - 01/25/2009
- good job!! its awsome! ^^
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- Angel Heart_Devil Mind - 01/25/2009
- WOW..This is really amazing and soo...deep. Really good..its kinda strange to hear but it makes sense.!! ^_^ awsome job ikuto!!
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- x__iiReplayLight - 01/25/2009
- i think this is alot more better than the whole thing itself obito ._."
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- x__iiMisteor - 01/25/2009
- thank you
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- blackeyelinerxoxo - 01/25/2009
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Amazing truly!
I was touched I write stuff like that but whoa great job I say your profile was the dark thing in the conner the thing your talking about? Great imagery - Report As Spam