What did I do wrong?

• Artist: jonathan0012
• Description: I got the idea of writing a poem & posting it on Gaia by fellow Gaians like you!So I decided to post one and I don't really care if I win or not.
  I think the ending is a bit off,but you're the one who's voting,so I don't care.Also,this is my FIRST time in the arena,but I still want you to vote fairly and PLZ don't write mean comments.If there something you hate about the poem,just only write what's good.
  Thanks for reading!
• Date: 01/20/2009
• Tags: wrongforgetcurseignorecheathate

When it happen,
When she leaves you,
Forget you,
Curse at you,
Ignore you,
Cheated on you?
You ask...why?

What did I do wrong?

Did I hurt her?
Harm her in pain?
Making her heart plain?

Did I forget her?
Act like she's dead?
Messing up her head?

Did I curse at her?
Saying the F-word,S-word,B-word?
Ruining her world?

Did I ignore her?
Avoiding her sight?
Pressuring her to fight?

Did I cheated on her?
Not thinking about the fun with her in bed?
Making her sleep with Ned?

Did I simply hate her?
Destroying the love?
Wanting to kill the doves?

What did I do wrong?

Maybe...I did nothing wrong!
Maybe SHE is the one who hurt me,
Forgot me,
Cursed at me,
Ignored me,
Cheated on me,
Hated me.

So...what DID I do wrong?

Why don't you ask her?

Comments

[Private cyclone]

omg that is amazing i loved it, nice job