Hurt

• Artist: iAre Lollipop
• Description: Mai poem, hope you like it.
• Date: 01/17/2009
• Tags: hurt

Take a knife and cut me up
if you hate me you won't stop
make me feel the pain within
as your slashing through my skin.

It makes me weaker as I bleed
for your mercy make me plead
hear me screaming in the dark,
as you leave painful marks.

Blood is running down my face,
as my beauty you erase
trying to cut through every vein
on your shirt you leave stains

I wish you knew I didn't care,
if you cut me everywhere
you can slit my skin apart
but you can't cut my broken heart

Comments

[shinitai666]

I like it

[CleVeR_clOnE]

wow! that's amazing! also i like the way it rhymes!
but also i saw some of the other comments on this poem, and i also think the poem name would be "pain" than hurt.

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

i like it! u pulled off dark nd sentimental so i like it!!

[Cathedral Az]

It's super dark, and I don't think most people can pull that off well, but you did. It gave me shivers!

[ii_313]

wow amazing i luv this 1 but wt i think the title should be instead of hurt is pain
smile