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Disclaimer:
It’s a birds, it’s a plane, its … oh never mind it just my dreams of having anything to do with Narutoã drifting off into The Abyssal Plains Of Death. sigh But I do own this poem.
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In the wind I blow
A sight to see
I know not were I go
In quest to be free
No matter what I try
Heart and mind in motion
Always I’m to wonder why
My body doesn’t get the notion
When I was the only one there to stop my love
Useful I was not, to be frank
For him escaping I only have myself to thank
Try as I might
no matter what I do
I will never be the light
to help dispel the dark, true?
In the wind I blow
I know not where I go.
-Haruna Sakura; age 13
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-Dragonfly51; Age 15
- by dragonfly51 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: What I Am?
- Artist: dragonfly51
- Description: A poem that I made about I of the characters from a show that I like.
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: sakura naruto dragonfly51 poem fanfiction
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Comments (2 Comments)
- dragonfly51 - 12/22/2008
- But I did it on the last two lines, also.
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- Malakai Mail - 12/21/2008
- it's decent, but on the 10th and 11th lines, you kind of drop your rhyming pattern. 3/5
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