stapled shut

• Artist: XallXaloneXbrokenX
• Description: um....this is no were near as good as 'shattered doll' but it's late at night and the outside snow is killing me to play in *peaks out window*
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: stapled shut comfort

Theres always pain, i can see it in you every day
But you can't seem to win the game.
Tearing at your hair
scratching your wrist.
Canceling out your feelings
by bringing the pain in willing.
Snowing blood
I think you can't breath
Drowning in your own self pain.

Stabled shut,
My heart won't open.
There's a storm growing inside,
A monsoon of some type.
Calm it down
If you really dare
Share my pain
If your not scared.

Open the door
Light shines threw, you scamper away.
Shameful eyes
Pull my heart tight.
Walking your way
I got this under control.
Just gotta open your doors.

Comments

[Flagged2774]

I noticed, that you wrote 'this is not as good as shattered doll'
you have to believe, that this is just as good, just not the same. there might be things, you like more that other, but that's because they're not the same. this is just as good as the other, and someone will think its a much better, because they might have been through this them self. the fact that its thoughts and feelings, this, makes them even.
but that was just a long note about nothing related to the poem...