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It feels like a deja vú.
I'm here alone with you
and I don't know what to do.
Here we are just us two
In front of the sea,
that's so green and blue.
I hope you can see
that my feelings are true.
Only one kiss will make my day...
I hope this kiss will make you stay
by my side,
every day.
- by ShizukaUme |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Sea of Love
- Artist: ShizukaUme
- Description: Well this is my poem. A lot of people in my school liked it so I hope you'll enjoy it too.
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sailor0taku - 05/15/2009
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wow so beautiful reminds me of how i fell with da guy i lyk♥ 5/5
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- mysterious beauty 73261 - 12/08/2008
- it is so good
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- xXSagieee BabieXx - 12/07/2008
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That wasss pretty good, but the end of the poem is most important and some consrtuctive critisism dont b so redundat smile
but ur word choice was amazing smile - Report As Spam
- Jerpadurr - 12/07/2008
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No words...5/5
Also, W00t First comment - Report As Spam
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