Love me Boy; Love me Girl

• Artist: xXRawr-GirrXx
• Description: Well, me and a friend decided to make a poem together and this is what we came up with... I created it and he edited it and came up with the idea. Editor: iCelebi
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: love girl

My heart has fallen for him
Falling down to an endless space
A place deep down where light is dim
When I see him my heart begins to race

I see her when she walks by
Her friends and her so popular
I love her but it's all a lie
I know I'd never be good enough for her

I love him, it wouldn't work out
I love her, I don't have a chance
I love him, my heart wants to shout
I love her, when our eyes glance

My body grows numb
When I see his beautiful face
When I look at him
He'll look back with such grace

It's like listening to a song
When I hear her speak
She smiles when I stare
She knows I'm sneaking a peak

I'm just a girl, there's nothing else to say
I'm just a boy, she'll never be mine
I'm just a girl, I might aswell slip away
I'm just a boy, there's no social bind

When I see him all alone
I can't help but smile
I'd say "Hello"
But walking toward him is like walking a mile

This heart can't take much more
My soul begs for her to be in my life
I love her so much I want to cry
But I'll have to give up the fight

I'm sorry boy, I find this hard to believe
I'm sorry girl, I'm never gonna say "Hi"
I'm sorry boy, I'm ready to leave
I'm sorry girl, I'm going to have to say "Good-bye"

Comments

[Starry Starry Fright]

I like this, it really sounds like it could be set to music.

[Ecahi55]

I love it, i sounds like it could even be a song, a duet between a girl and boy.

[iResell]

Beautiful...yo buddy you should read mine, I added two....add me to fans and I'm adding you so we can work together more...Maybies!

[nksnoopy]

that waz really good.. the ending was kinda sad * sniff sniff*

[Ryan_A_Lycan]

very good, blue was a little hard to read but i still liked it 5/5