No Love

• Artist: Faifey
• Description: Poem of experience with a difficult boy.
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: love

I'm done now.
Please,
just stop.
Now.
Rambling, you keep rambling.
Talk, talk.
Nothing.
Absolute,
nothing...

I've seen you,
There is no passion.

Too much.
Too much talk.
Only you.
Your mind.
Your sick.
I'm not.

No passion.
No love.
Lifeless.
Lost attraction...

Comments

[- L u c i p h y r -]

I like the poem. smile

[idiochrome]

The first half of the poem is quite good, but I think it loses something in the end. I think you could easily crop the poem after the "You're sick, I'm not" and it would be better. Overall I like it.