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I found my eyes looking up to the sky at night.
My eyes resting on a cool glowing sight.
It seems to call to some.
It will always rise with the nights to come.
The pale glow sometimes shows its face.
Although it might not even leave a trace.
Some always seems to howl to its glow,
which makes quite a beautiful show.
Eyes shining bright,
in the darkness of the night.
Calling to their equals,
each song creates another sequel.
Beautiful howls floating through the air.
Sometimes even made by more than just a pair.
Usually showing their feelings to their friends.
Their friends and their conversations finally end.
A lot of the time these creature find themselves looking up at night.
Their beautiful glowing eyes resting on the cool bluish looking sight.
Comments (2 Comments)
- Fangthorn - 09/21/2008
- help line. Just to let you know. This type of poem is called a couplet. It is suppose to only have two line stanzas.
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- Helpline - 09/14/2008
- This has a great rhyme but maybe you should try to make the stanzas a little longer than 2 lines although that is a very good poem and a very good method by making the stanzas longer you could give your poem a better rhythm. However you did do a great job! 5/5
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