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So there i was in the corner of the windowless room
The air closing in on me
My eyes getting heavier my the second
Me, very exhausted and trying to keep my eyes from shutting
feeling the dampness and darkness of the room
This feeling is something i have never felt before
it make me feel numb to the core
i am remembering all the memories i had
this feeling its
Death
- Title: DEATH
- Artist: j 14412
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- Date: 09/30/2009
- Tags: death
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- dudette punk - 11/13/2009
- Well, i couldn't really "feel" the story. I think you could add more detail and emotion to it.
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