• i sat in a corner...thinking of how the world would be...if soon i was to leave...leave into the pits of no were...i was a lost one...always liked to be lost in any place i found...i was...a dark one...i sat in the rain and cryed for no reason...wishing that soon some one will enter the heart in wich i beleived i had...i tryed to be perfect but never succeded...till...a girl came to my life...

    Chapter 1:life at dawn

    her name was alice...she came up to me...with a sad face...and asked me if i needed help around town...cuz i was new...all i heard from her voice was suffering...and tears...i said...yes...can u show me around?...she did and she was very quiet...we sat and chated and laughed...and till that day...we became great freinds...she followed me every were i go...she wud tell me things and i wud tell her...it was a beutiful life...at dawn...

    Chapter 2:darkness to no

    i asked her...wat was she that she was always quiet...she told me she was emo...i cud not beleive it...she was dark inside...very dark...and i changed her to a person who laughs till this day...when she told me she was emo...it was a shock i had within...most of those people cry all the time...and need love...but they go thro wat they go thro...cuz they are always alone...that day...i learned alot about poele lik that...there hard to break there shell of the confusion of being emo...and trun to hard core normal peole...i changed her...cuz if not she wud have been rotting inside...and that was a darkness...to no...

    Chapter 3:angels fly

    it was 3 months since we met and now we fall in love...we protect each other and do everything we care to do...and then she told me...im a happy person...we heard music and danced...till she said...lets play out side...i said ok and went...she ran to the streets and i looked at her...she had the eyes of an delicate angel...and i told her...ur an angel...she stand in the middle of the street and teared and said...i love u...*CRASH*!!!.....alice!!!!!!!!.....she died that day....and ille never forget the moments we lasted to gether...she was an angel...just resurected from bad...and the day we had fun together was the day death took us apart....this was the day my angel flyed...


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