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Cursed into the
Ashes
Then reborn Anew.
A burning Phoenix
With
A burning vengeance.
Vengence
Hate
Deadly hate
Those who Cursed
You
Are those unknowing.
Who will pay
A
mighty Toll.
- by Kenya Tsukiko |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/06/2009 |
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- Title: Cursed
- Artist: Kenya Tsukiko
- Description: i got the inspration for this poem from a book and some of my own feallings when i was really pissed at some ppl at my schoole...
- Date: 07/06/2009
- Tags: cursed
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Comments (2 Comments)
- livinglyf3 - 07/08/2009
- Just don't like the last "Who will" part. The poem ends very abruptly. Other than that, I love it.
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- AeonHonor - 07/07/2009
- I like your 9th Line..."Are those unknowing"
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