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The bullet through the world
Left ashes for us to see
To smell each and everyday
Every kid thinking “It was probably for me…”
Like god himself
Had pulled the trigger
Or an angel screaming
When the hole got bigger
A chilling breeze
Swept down our spines
As we watched the liars
Whisper to them “I’m fine.”
It’s almost as if
Everyone’s given up
And the lord himself
Found arguing rough
And it’s almost as if
Watching a disease spread
And each time you blink
You just never know—
Your best friend could be dead.
- by XxcarlehhxX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: Behind Your Shoulder
- Artist: XxcarlehhxX
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pretty depressing >.< - Date: 06/16/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- szayel-aporro-fan - 08/15/2013
- Very well written poem ^_^
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- Lithium In Bloom - 08/09/2010
- It was good, catchy. 4/5.
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- Deaths_Daughter4018 - 03/31/2010
- This is a wonderful poem. It's the best I've seen on here. Keep at it.
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- neyo88 - 02/08/2010
- haha XD loved it.
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- Amvu - 02/05/2010
- I like it, but you don't always have to rhyme. I feel that poetry should be more free flowing, and it's okay to get off on an idea without rhyme, as long as you get your point across. 3/5
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- alishaluv - 01/01/2010
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deep is the the right description for this poem. its so....deep. 5/5!
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- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 12/01/2009
- its deep...i love it.... definitely different but in a good way
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