Crying Angel

• Artist: Reachi Days
• Description: This story is actually just made-up by me. Not sure if it'll work out though. So please read.. ^^
• Date: 05/02/2009
• Tags: crying angel

There were once this girl.. She used to lived in a happy apartment with her friends, who was now gone.. She's expecting love and care from her friends and family but where were they when she needed them?

On this one night.. She cried and cried for weeks.. She never eats in 2 weeks where people starts to ignore her. Everyday, she'll ask her self "Why would this happen happen to me? What have i done? What makes them run away?". But no one looks for her, no one cares.. Everynight, she'll cry from day to night until.. a light appear and come an angel from up above..

She was shocked! "Who are you?" asked her. Then.. the angel softly answered "I'm am Angel.. Haven't you know, my dear?". Confused look starts wrapping her face. "What happened? Do you have the answer to all this?".. "Dear, you're dead since 2 weeks ago. People won't dare to come to your house because you keep crying."

"Oh.. So all this time.. Now may i know how'd i die?" ,"You went in an accident.. Now come to heaven with me.. "

Comments

[darklove_zorg]

You have serious tense issues, you should either pick past or present and stick with it. It isn't well written, I'm afraid, but keep working at it.