book beginning

• Artist: hidansrevenge
• Description: book beginning see if you like it!
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: book beginning like

sweeping his eyes he knew it was going to end if he didn't do it. the gray cloud he puffed from the cold was his last breath before he went under. he had to do something.
With the rest of his strength he dove into the ice cold water knowing what was down there. from his back pocket revealed a colt revolver perfect for his mission. he steadied the gun for his final blow. but it was too late...



hear the rest later. this was all made by me its a fiction about....you'll see wink

Comments

[r33na1]

Sounds cool! could you read mine? i know it's no that good but i'm new i really want some feedback.

[lizziebear1]

line from my book. i'm no punk i'm sk8er.
What do you think of when you hear the word high school? I think of the word clicks. You now, preppy cheerleaders, Goths, wannabes, class clowns, emos, skates, gagsters, nerds, and last but not least, us the punks. My name is Carle McLain. I live in nothing to do, Nashville, Tennessee. I’m the punk girl that you can’t help but look twice at as you think “Is she really wearing that?!” or “WOW!! That is SO sad.”

[ohhdarnit]

ooooooh! cool, i gotta read some more!

[ii-MidnightAngel-ii]

cool cant wait to read it all