roxas and namine a love story

• Artist: punkkiari
• Description: its kinda like another world wise like a nobody world while their there sora and kiari are in there world short thing youll have to use imagination for this
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: kingdomhearts

"roxas?" says a voice far from him he opens his eyes and discovers a girl in white."wh-who are you?" says roxas with wide eyes "im namine" she says reaching for a hand shake. roxas dosent reply "uhhhhhhh where am i?" he says puzzled "your in our world" she says calmly "OUR world why OUR world what is OUR world?". he said kind of irritated "the nobodys world" she said "nobody?!" roxas said now fed up " YOUR CRAZY!" says roxas now walking away "roxas dont you want to know about the dreams?". namine says with reason roxas stops and scrunches up his fists "how do you know about the dreams!" roxas says with anger to be continued.......................................... mrgreen heart heart heart heart see the next one tommorrow BYEZZZ

Comments

[xXxScytheMeisterMakaxXx]

confusing -.-

[moonlightwolf111]

Confusing. Grammar is terrible, and try to captilize the names. Roxas, Namine. Other than that it's alright. 2/5

[Loxar]

this is pretty cool

[DandayoCloud]

it's a bit confusing, but other than that it's pretty good biggrin

[xambler]

it's alright