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- | Submitted on 10/26/2009 |
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- Title: i wanna be a rockstar...
- Artist: smashed badgers
- Description: my first submission :D
- Date: 10/26/2009
- Tags: wanna rockstar
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Comments (9 Comments)
- Yuka Uchiha - 11/08/2009
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Ehhh.
Well,you did OKAY.
It's good for a first - you have some talent.
Buuut,it's not excellent material.
It's creative,though,and you should keep most of it.
However,I'd invest in a different headband and possibly some face paint,because the title makes me think of a wannabe rockstar.
The shoes and pants...Well,I'd pick more tattered-looking pants,such as the BSS pants or something.
As for the shoes...well,I'd choose something along the lines of starter sneakers.
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- IoI Sparkle IoI - 11/08/2009
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It took me a lot of submissions before I knew how to make a 5/5 star avatar, just keep trying.
People rate avatars 5/5 that fit a theme that's easy to identify. Don't be discouraged, just keep trying.
I recommend going to tektek.org and using their dream avi simulator. - Report As Spam
- Ruuna Neko - 11/07/2009
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it made me lol
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- Riku Tsumi - 11/06/2009
- Also my rating was 3/5 stars
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- Riku Tsumi - 11/06/2009
- You did well for you first submission however I'm not going to say it's 5 star matirial. I'd switch the shoes and maybe go with some goth starter boots and replace the jeans with torn ones. However the cigarette and scrubby chin hair was a nice touch, I also liked the hair. I agree that a stand up microphone would be a good idea.
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- ayanna247 - 11/06/2009
- nice
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- ooOO-Melissa-OOoo - 11/05/2009
- I agree with the first comment, and I would suggest taking the Kung Fu Panda headband away, and adding a more rockstar-ish headband.
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