- Title: Koi Pond
- Artist: Dairamir
- Description: I've wanted to get into painting for a few months now. I finally got around to try it a few weeks ago when I started this. The Koi lost some color in the scan but otherwise its normal. Its my first painting ever so please give me some comments on how to make my work better!!!!
- Date: 03/31/2011
- Tags: pond koifish
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Renay Black - 12/05/2011
- this is truly amazing! to be able to pick something up that quickly, even as chalenging as painting... my really only comment is maybe for you to adjust the rocks arround the base of the house (the yellow and brown ones) they seem alot brighter than everthing else. but over all really awesome job!
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- DragonArcher93 - 04/08/2011
- It is very well done. If the fish is going to be that close, add a little shading to it in some areas. You did good by making the water in the background darker. It flows nicely overall though. Great job.
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- Serena-Of-Limonium - 04/07/2011
- I think that the fish isn't really incorrect it just appears that the head is closer than the bottom of the body. which isn't incorrect it just comes off as a bit strange to some. I think you are leaps and bounds ahead of most starting painters If your going for super realist photo like paintings you need work but If this is the style you prefer then you are well on your way.
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- auro luna - 04/02/2011
- no its perfect the way it is the koi is not to big love it
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- H PrincessOfTheMoon H - 04/01/2011
- I like it no matter what, I think its just lovely ^_^
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- synn-oveee - 03/31/2011
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really good! biut agree with subtlerain that the fish looks pretty big
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- Handske - 03/31/2011
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: D IT'S LOVERLY
The only problem I have is that the koi doesn't look like it's jumping close to the viewer - it looks like there is a ginormous monster fish jumping out of the water. So, depth is wacky, but I have no idea how to fix it. D: - Report As Spam
