- Title: manga boy
- Artist: Imaile
- Description: Ahhhh I know I kinda suck so I need to practice some more........ Please rate n comment! ^-^ I hope I get better T_T........ Can you guys point out what I need to practice? thanks......
- Date: 02/17/2010
- Tags: manga
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Imaile - 06/22/2012
- Ah! Thank you for the tips! :'D This was drawn over 2 years ago when I was still just using my touchpad ans ms paint.
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- Toastilicious - 06/03/2012
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Okay, so I suggest having cleaner lines. They're a bit rough and shaky. The head shape seems a bit crooked, but it's really just the chin. The hair would use a bit more details.
However, you seem to know your stuff so that's good. A bit of practice and you'll be drawing like a pro. - Report As Spam
- Imaile - 02/17/2010
- oops drawing not drawer hmm i guess the neck is too thin..
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- Imaile - 02/17/2010
- Thanks at least now I know the problems and I'll try harder to make a better drawer >-<! ^-^
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- Yvvki - 02/17/2010
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*make
and the neck is a bit long, i have the neck problem too xD - Report As Spam
- Yvvki - 02/17/2010
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ake the top of the head more round and put the chin in the center of the face and it will look much better. <3
And don't worry so much. You WILL improve if you really want to! n.n
Good luck biggrin - Report As Spam
