- by Master Stamp |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 02/17/2010 |
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- Title: my first romantic drawing
- Artist: Master Stamp
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Description:
I wanted to draw something different from my usual fighters and one person drawings. So I tried a romantic scene. Please leave a comment on what I should improve
(This isn't a finished version since it was my first) - Date: 02/17/2010
- Tags: first romantic drawing
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LauraKitten - 02/20/2010
- The guys expresion is like" Hey! whats going on here!?" now thats not very romantic now is it? oh and it looks like hes trying 2 pull away. maybe u should try 2 make him hold her a little bit tighter.
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- Master Stamp - 02/18/2010
- No neck?.... oh yeah i see it its just that its covered with the giant scarf heh..... you can see the scarf around her neck if you have a zoom feature on your computer.
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- JC needle - 02/17/2010
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3/5 for your efforts (its a good thing)
:3
and the girl looks ok, try to give her a neck though - Report As Spam
- JC needle - 02/17/2010
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You should make the legs wider and more round.
And if you wanted to make the guys eyes opened halfway, then you try to make it look something like this: http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20guy%20kissing/Nollie_02/KissingIntheSnow.jpg?o=5
or you can close the eyes completely and point the line slightly downward. - Report As Spam
