- by RinTanakaTheFireDemon |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/07/2009 |
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- Title: avi art
- Artist: RinTanakaTheFireDemon
- Description: head shot of more avi art, i thought it turned out cute =]
- Date: 11/07/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Kaihei Tsukiredi - 11/10/2009
- Okay... but still, it looks very disproportioned and even if your style has big eyes it just looks too big for the face.
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- sweetiesgirl321 - 11/08/2009
- it did turn out pretty good, but definetly room for improvement 3/5
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- RinTanakaTheFireDemon - 11/08/2009
- ugh its a chibi head shot, and its my stly i always draw big eyes,,,
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- Kaihei Tsukiredi - 11/08/2009
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circular motions. And also, when you're dealing with 3D objects, try to use your imagination or refrence to see where the exact angle is when looking in one direction (for example, if your character is in a 3/4th view, have the headphones look like they're in a 3/4 view). Also, don't be afraid to add more detail. Get some seperate strands of hair in the girl's hair. Keep practicing. 2/5 - Report As Spam
- Kaihei Tsukiredi - 11/08/2009
- You need to work on your proportions. The head is far too large, even for a headshot and the neck needs to be slimmed out more. I eyes are too large even for the head and your mouth is too close to the jaw line. And your object proportions (the headphones) look too 2D-ish. It's like you rushed through this whole picture. I would like to suggest looking at anatomy refrences, add some more detail, be patient with your drawing (don't get so messy with it), and when you're coloring, color in small
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