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  • Rayne
  • Title: Rayne
  • Artist: Moondoggy09
  • Description: The third and final centeral character from my manga I literally just finished drawing it moments ago Im not sure im happy with it but im not sure exactly what it is that bothers me so if you see a major flaw please point it out
  • Date: 03/24/2009
  • Tags: rayne moondoggy manga
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • ronsquared - 10/24/2009
  • i think rayne is totally awesome and super georgeous. i want to read ur manga. win
    and so does my vacuum cleaner
  • Ruth-of-Angels - 05/22/2009
  • I really like this! She's gorgeous. I'd ask for avatar art, but not only am I a newb account and have no money, I look terrible! -.- LOL
  • summer1412 - 03/29/2009
  • The one thing that's throwing me off a little about this one, is that whatever is dangling off of her gun is moving in the opposite direction of her hair, so it sort of makes it seem inconsistent. But that's nothing huge, all around the picture is really good. The definition of her stomach is great, the shading is really good - subtle, but I think it works for this one. Awesome work.
  • Timia - 03/24/2009
  • I think that maybe the nose it throwing the face off a bit becuase it looks like she's faceing more forward but the nose makes it look like she more looking to the side more. Also her right arm looks a bit off.
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