- Title: Darling (chapter 1)
- Artist: Nyxorb
- Description: Working on a book. I would really appreciate any and all opinions, comments, grammar nazis, and suggestions. I'd really like to publish this eventually.
- Date: 11/10/2012
- Tags: darling chapter fiction romance
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Comments (6 Comments)
- xBeautiful_Earth_Fairyx - 01/15/2013
- Amazing! I felt sad and had pity for in the first few sentences. Great emotional detail!
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- Kalisca - 01/11/2013
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I am always surprised on Gaia when genres I don't typically enjoy are still able to draw me in simply because of how well they were written. This is one of those cases. 4/5 (-:
P.S. If you want me to personally go word-for-word and correct any spelling errors, just say the word and I'll PM you an edited version.
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- Nyxorb - 11/11/2012
- Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and for the comment, I'm very glad you like it biggrin
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- toy110 - 11/11/2012
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spelling error ignore
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- toy110 - 11/11/2012
- i normally don't take the time to read a lot of words because my attention span is short but i did read the story chapter. ant i love it it gives of a sad feeling almost like i feel sorry for her and keeps me on the edge of my seat. i would like to know whats about to happen so please keep me up dated. p.s you should publish it its better than what i wright.
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- Nyxorb - 11/10/2012
- Disregard the white "x"s. They are for formatting purposes only.
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